Young gun

I must say...nice poem.The beginning was good-straight down to business. The poem has clarity and is great because of its simplicity both,in words and presentation. If I got the poem ...

Nice piece there.Parts of the imagery used resembled a movie scene. I smile again at the raindrops now, Watching them lash against the window. They seem so happy. Probably another ...

Nice poem there.But you still have great scope for improvement I fight for my country I fight for my happiness I love my country and my family I love my ...

The craziness and distraction of the psychopath's mind is great.The stone hearted description is completely correct.There were however some things that need attention: A little more description of the

Great work there.However it did have places on which improvement was possible Some more information should be given about the narrator and the friend and, the time they spent togethter. ...

Amazingly deep poem there! The way you brought out the woman's suppression by her lover and how uncaring the guys was,was thought evoking.Towards the end the reader just cant help ...

Great poem there.Your poem gives a different meaning of grey. I liked all the possibilities you explored about the room without making the words "grey room" monotonous. Great portrayal of ...

Great portrayal of how youth can live in painful wishful thinking(the way i saw the poem). Great use of the cup and the drink.The end especially was really great when ...

Your poem had amazing construction of words and the characters were intricately described. Great detail has been given to the character of the liar and how his bad habit devours ...